Hello everyone! I just wanted feedback on this poem I wrote for Timberwolf. Tell me what you think, and what could be made better!
The Prophecy
From the ashes of quiet mayhem
A foretold change was born
A hero with eyes like the sky
And the voice of a battle horn.
Restless evil from ages past
Will stir at the hero’s first cries
The hunt thus begins with a widow’s tears
And will cease when prejudice dies.
A sword of myth will hence be forged
And will lay in the depths of the earth
Unburied by fate and fortitude
And brandished with the spirit’s birth.
The hero will ride upon destiny
At the right hand spirit will stand
An entity so strong and so mighty
So remembered through all the land.
Sleep does not come easily
To those that the prophet has spoken
Thus words of coming and pending change
The weak man will only have broken.
When the moon reflects off the waters
Only then will the azurewolf rise.
Only then will the azurewolf rise.
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Wow Laura! 😃
That’s a awsome poem!😄
I loved it! ❤️
Keep writing!😘
– Casey🐱
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Wow! That’s soooo amazing Laura!! 😊 I loved it!!
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wow, good job!
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